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Date: 10/10/1999 3:26:00 PM
From Authorid: 963
Uh huh. This happened. Yep. |
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Date: 10/23/1999 2:33:00 AM
Remember. extacy is a neurotoxin. It's bad for you!!! |
Date: 10/24/1999 5:03:00 PM
From Authorid: 177
Unless I'm badly mistaken...and I appologise if I am...this story is poo poo just like your friend said. Kindest regards, T. Crapmaster.  |
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Date: 10/24/1999 5:07:00 PM
From Authorid: 177
Unless I'm badly mistaken...and I apologise if I am...this story is poo poo just like your friend said. Kindest regards, T. Crapmaster. |
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Date: 11/1/1999 9:56:00 AM
GRIZZ is a super sexy man..... great story |
Date: 11/1/1999 3:03:00 PM
From Authorid: 1461
(it made me never to call it names,to never get fat and die in bed) those are few good things to live by.Another thing, never end your story with "THE END" you should have kept us wondering if there was to be a part two.All I can say besides agreeing with the last response, is that the story needed more detail.I want see it as well as be able to read it, I want to see in my mind the massive 450 lb. grandmother being burned to a crisp,other than that I applaud the effort.  |
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Date: 11/1/1999 11:19:00 PM
From Authorid: 1454
hey person above...i think you're being too kind...waaaay too kind! |
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Date: 11/2/1999 5:46:00 AM
From Authorid: 1461
to 1454: yea your right, I am being way to kind, I guess I'm looking at it from a stand point that we all must learn to write somewhere, so this web-site seems to be a good place to start.I know for one, that writing here helps me with my college writing, essays and so forth.The kid seems to have a good imagination, if only he could make it sound more believable. -Taz- |
Date: 11/4/1999 2:10:00 PM
From Authorid: 1631
If this really happened, I think it's terribly sad. What a disrespectful and unloving way to remember your own Grandmother! YOU created a chain of events that killed this poor woman, and I can only imagine how she must have suffered. I hope that someday you grow up and ask the Lord's forgiveness and honor your Grandmother's memory. I REALLY hope this was made up because I hate to think of another human being suffering like that only to have her own grandchild make light of it. (by the way, what goes around comes around and I'm glad I'm not you).  |
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Date: 5/26/2000 4:06:00 PM
From Authorid: 177
Up to the point where gramma got burned up in bed, I thought these events might possibly have happened; some bizarre things can occurr sometimes. Maybe she did burn up in bed. At any rate sorry if that was the case. |
