RABB-ID HOLE REVISTED! fellow poets...please read.....or anyone. this is about well me *Cblossom*   Author:  20296  Category:(Discussion) Created:(5/13/2008 4:31:00 PM) This post has been Viewed (125 times) Alice fell down the hole she chose to go, yes, she did choose to go unchartered territories a tempting diversion she chased that elusive rabbit the one that promised so much a life free of pain and strife a existance based on lie she chased that elusive rabbit she would find him soon enough her senses aroused a little more then she could take did she jump to soon did she make a mistake her soul gave a tremble a fear took ahold was it stupidity to be so bold as to look for a light in a dank dark hole? The rabbit she found he did a quick turn his face a monstocity don't trust bunnies, a lesson quick learned he sneered at her trust and laughed in her face 'you can't be so niave to think life so simple that one easy fix will fix this pickle' ‘take this’ said the figure dressed up in the white suit it will make you feel better and happy to boot she took it in trust a big mistake never trust bunnies that seem so safe She wandered around her senses on overload her mind reeling, her heart racing a new feeling; afraid Alice never showed any fear she was strong and full of might the demons that plagued her always took flight but not this night not the night she jumped in the hole. her thoughts were muddled her feelings misplaced who was she now and how did she get back to where she once was. The bunny rattled his bag said "is there more you wish you had?' 'No', she replied with a twisted face. "what else could you give that I have not had?' A mistake was made one that could be fixed but not with a simple wish or a wave of the wand or a magic pill a journey was started but she stood still Alice sat and drank tea and pondered her thoughts when she did she give up the fight was within her deep in her soul digging deep would be hard as the soil of her spirit was now dark and cold She jumped in the hole, this was her fault now she must find a way out but how do you jump UP a hole? this came out in literally about five minutes. it is not the best and I am sure I could edit it. i wanted opinions on it. do you see any symbolism (what i meant or what you think) critique...honest, ect. You can join Unsolved Mysteries and post your own mysteries or interesting stories for the world to read and respond to Click here Scroll all the way down to read replies. Show all stories by   Author:  20296 ( Click here ) Spring is coming