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Andrew : part one

  Author:  1574  Category:(Mysterious) Created:(10/10/1999 9:36:00 PM)
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It was a warm sunny day in july. My sister and I were at the beach watching people walk by. There isn't much to do in Ohio, much less, Lorain; Population 3,487. My sister, Nina, was pregnant, and was eager for the Sunshine Festival to begin. This is a festival held every year to spotlight local bands. Our brother, Rey, was performing. It was the first time Rey had been on stage since he got out of prison. Things turned bad one night, when he hit a man in the head with a bottle of whisky. Killed him. He was sentenced to twelve years in prison, but was able to serve only ten. He got out for good behavior.

The sky started to get dark over Lake Erie. I remember my sister feeling uneasy. She told me that earlier in the week, she bumped into an old lady. The lady said to her, that the child she was carring was going to make an impact to the people around it. She also went on to say, that something wicked was forming inside her. That bothered my sister to a point, but she was able to put it behind her. The clouds got darker and darker. The wind began to pick up, and sand was blowing everywhere. The MC came out and told everyone that the festival was cancelled. My Brother was crushed. Not for the fact that the festival was cancelled, but for the fact that he didn't get to perform. It started to rain, so my sister and I decided to go home. We told Rey that we would see him later, only we didn't know how much later.

When we got home, my sister sat on the couch, to watch TV. I went up stairs to change into dry clothes. As I turned on the bedroom light, the power went out through out the house. I turned around and headed down stairs. When I reached my sister, she was crying. I sat next to her and asked "what's wrong?" She pointed to a corner in the living room. There, in the dark, was a figure. I froze!I shouted: "who are you?" The figure didn't respond. It only stood there and watched us from the corner. I could hear it breathing. I looked around to sees if I could use something;anything as a weapon. No luck.

The figure started to move over to a window that was to the right of it. When lightning flashed, the strobe filled the room, and for the brief moment the light shined in the room, I saw the figure. It was a leather brown, with hair on one side of its head. It stood upright, and had wings. Its eyes were a glossy grey, and at times, the eyes turned in opposite directions. Once in while, while breathing, it would make a sound. Kind of like a loud-weezing, growl. I could see my watch, from time to time between lightning flashes. We sat there looking at this thing for two hours. All I could think about was "what's going to happen when my brother walks to the front door?" My sister held my hand as my brother's car pulled into the driveway. We could hear him singing as he walked to the front door, searching through his keys. I turned to my sister and saw nothing but shear panic in her eyes.

Rey walked in and reached out for the light switch. " Hey? is anyone home?" The moment after he said that, the creature jumpped over the couch and stood face to face with Rey. My sister at this point, began to shake franticly. I stood up and said to my brother, " Don't move." " Good advice, he replied, I'll take that under concideration. What the hell is this?". I began to make my mway, slowly, to the front closet.I knew that if I could just get to the closet, I could use an old sword that I used when I was Mercutio in Romeo & Juliet.

The creature was now nose to nose with my brother. It looked him over. I had my hand on the door knob. Then the creature spoke in a low and deep voice, as if it were talking through a large and very long pipe. " If he opens the door, you will die." I stoppped. I could hear it talking but was too far to hear what it was saying. Again the creature spoke, " If the door opens, you will die." I looked at my brother. Beads of sweat filled his face. "What's he saying Rey?" I asked. " Um...he says...don't open the door, or I will die." I stopped where I was and just looked. "Sit." it murmured. I said, "what's he saying?" Next thing I knew the creature turned and in a loud yell said "SIT!" My brother and I ran to the couch.

The pictures on the walls, rattled as it walked in front of us. " I have come for the child." My sister looked at me for help. What could I do? It's obviuos that this thing is one hundred times stronger than me. "you can't take the baby! I won't let you!" I shouted. The creature just laughed and got into my face. " what can you do to stop me from taking the unborn?" It replied. " You are nothing;a hu-man." My brother looked at me and said, "he does have a point." I then turned to the creature and said, "ok!, I'll make a deal with you. You let me fight you for the baby. If I win you leave here and never come back, and if I lose, you can take me as well." The creature leaned back a little and then said, " I will except your challenge, but instead of duel, you will be put through the KYRUNFA!" (kai-roon-fa)"what is the Kyroonfa?" I replied. " The KYRUNFA is mearly a test of wit, endurance and strength" " What kinds of test?" I asked. "let me put it to you this way, no one has ever made it passed the second stage." I nodded my head and the creature began his test.

" Your first test is to answer a riddle, ON YOUR FRONT LAWN ARE TEN PEICES OF COAL, FOUR STICKS, FOUR ROCKS AND TWO CARROTS. WHY ARE THE OBJECTS THERE?"

"What happens if I don't answer the riddle correctly?" I asked. The creature just smiled and licled his lips. Now I was starting to get worried, On my front lawn, there were ten peices of coal, four sticks, four rocks and two carrots. This wasn't going to be easy. Then my brother wispered to "think snow!" The creature howled and with one motion of his hand, he threw him clear accross the living room. "Give me the answer!" yelled the creature. Then it hit me like a ton of bricks. "SNOW MEN!, THE STUFF ON MY LAWN WAS FROM TWO SNOWMEN THAT MELTED!" I smiled. The creature went into a rage, ripping the drywall off of the walls. Then he grabbed my sister by the neck and said to her,"I will return for you and the unborn." Next he grabbed me by my neck, and everything went black.

When I awoke, I was surrounded by hundreds of the same creatures. I was in a chamber that was about the same size as the Astro Dome.There were torches that lit up most of the chamber. I could smell dry blood. The air was stale and it was very humid.

Suddenly, a another creature came near the edge of the third story balcony. It was pretty dark in that area, but I could see the reflection, of the eyes, of all of the creatures on that floor. It spoke in a language that I was not familiar with. Finally, one of the creatures came forward and transulated what was said. "Hu-man. You have answered - first riddle of - KYRUNFA. Prepare yourself for level. If you answer the next riddle correct, you will move to combat level of KYRUMFA." Every creature in the chamber began to laugh and yell. Then two slightly smaller creatures came and ripped my shirt off and place a collar around my neck. I felt a strange sensation in my head. The only thing I remember is falling to my knees and when I stood up, I was in a white room with two very large statues, half human-half creature.

The transulator spoke, "YOU ARE IN A ROOM WITH TWO DOORS." I looked around and saw the two doors. "BEHIND ONE OF THESE DOORS, IS THE NEXT LEVEL OF THE KYRUNFA, BEHIND ONE OF THESE DOORS, IS A SHENDO NEST." " What exactly, is a SHENDO?" I asked. "SHENDO ARE FLESH EATING BEATLES, THAT CAN DIGEST FLESH VERY PAINFULLY - VERY SLOWLY" At this point, things didn't look so good. "LOCKED IN THE ROOM WITH YOU IS LIER AND HONEST. YOU CAN ASK ONE QUESTION, AND ONLY ONE. THE QUESTION MUST LEAD YOU TO LEVEL TWO OF THE KYRUNFA."

Needless to say, at this point, I should have let him take my sister. I'm kidding, but the thought did cross my mind. I sat down on the floor, and looked around. I stood and looked at one of the statues. Then it hit me, if the question I ask, has to lead my out of the room, then I'll just ask one statue to ask the other statue, to tell me the way out. Okay, here goes..."Ask the other statue to open the door that leads to the shendo nest. The statue spoke and repeated what I just asked him. Seconds later, the other statue pointed to the door. In turn, it swung open. Nothing was happening. I slowly creeped my may to the door and began to peek out side. All of a sudden, a guard grabbs me by the neck and throws me before the crowd of creatures. I was back at the chamber where I first started the whole thing.

The head creature began to speak. He seamed as if he were in a bad mood. Then the transulator began to speak. " You have reached a level, most not reach. Our leader asks how? How you find answer to puzzle?" I shake the dust from my clothes and told him how I came to the answer to the riddle. " You said that I had to ask one question to only one statue...you never said anything about asking one statue to ask the other, a question. I knew that if I asked the liar, not knowing who he was, he would reverse my question and the way out would be shown. If I asked the honest statue, not knowing who he was, he would have repeated what I said. In turn, the liar would reverse the answer showing me the way out."

The chamber was silent. I looked around, and all I could see were the reflections of their eyes. "Did I say something wrong?" On that, the entire chamber went nuts! They were throwing everything and anything the could find, at me. I began to dodge some of the things.

***** GO READ PART TWO *****

Titled..."Andrew: Part 2"

How it changed my life:

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Date: 10/10/1999 11:00:00 PM  From Authorid: 101    Please continue... Great story..  
Date: 10/11/1999 6:02:00 AM    Please continue this story soon it was real good. vivi
Date: 10/11/1999 12:23:00 PM    wow...I can't wait for the rest of it.
Date: 10/12/1999 8:52:00 AM  From Authorid: 408    Great story, now hurry up with the continuation!-K.
Date: 10/12/1999 2:09:00 PM    I don't care. Hey kids, How about trying to answer the riddle? Always read "HOW IT CHANGED MY LIFE". I leave clues if you don't understand. Thanks for the 411, Dallas. - Jedi
Date: 10/13/1999 11:00:00 AM  From Authorid: 1027    you want a answer to the riddle? you got it!
I personally would ask one of the other to in the room to ask the other one in the room to open the door that leads out, then either way I would know which door leads out.
how you ask? well if the honest person asks the liar to open the door that leads out the liar will open the door to the to the shendo nest and consumed and I would haul a$$ to the other door.
where if the liar asks the honest person to open the door he would open the right door to the way out.
Now take us to the next level oh GREAT ONE!- THE RIDDLE MASTER
Date: 10/13/1999 2:49:00 PM    Hey riddle master, he lived in a light house. When he turned off the lights, a ship smashed into the light house, causing everyone on board to die. - Jedi
Date: 10/13/1999 2:51:00 PM    You are sooooo close, but no cigar! Check back later, and I will take you to the next level.-Jedi
Date: 10/13/1999 2:53:00 PM    Love your story! Dee
Date: 10/13/1999 2:54:00 PM    FINALLY! SOMEONE WHO CAN TELL A STORY! REX
Date: 10/13/1999 2:57:00 PM    Take me to the next level!
Date: 10/15/1999 10:42:00 PM  ( Admin )   Dallas, Hawk, Jedi write some stories that contest conventional thinking. Then others will critisize your thinking and you will have fun again.. I will start it for you...
Date: 10/16/1999 7:15:00 AM  From Authorid: 277    To Admin: I'm getting the feeling that you want us to remain at your website. Possibly because writing a story that contests conventional thinking would keep people coming to your website??? Hawk  
Date: 10/16/1999 8:32:00 AM  From Authorid: 1027    OH JEDI PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR STORY DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING IN THIS CONDITION FINISH THE JOB AND DO IT WELL- PRINCESS LAY-YA
Date: 10/16/1999 9:38:00 AM  ( Admin )   You are absolutely correct and you are the people we want to keep at this site. In fact, I would appreciate any suggestions that you have that would make this site more interesting for you.
Date: 10/16/1999 10:35:00 AM  From Authorid: 1091    I think you should really write a fantasy book. Your a great author! Your riddles are too hard! If it was me I would have gotten eaten by the shendo beetles
Date: 10/16/1999 11:51:00 AM    Hey ADMIN., I've tried to log on for the past two days and I can't update my story. it says,"Due to maintenance, U.M. is unavailable now. check back later" What's up? you guys still working on the site?, Or am I locked out? -Jedi
Date: 10/17/1999 10:44:00 AM    Jedi you are very talented. Your writing is mentally stimulating. RAYA
Date: 10/18/1999 6:26:00 PM  From Authorid: 277    Its called clearing your cache (deleting cookies). If this is the case, they probably never blocked us out. Hawk  
Date: 10/18/1999 9:54:00 PM  ( Admin )   Nobody is blocked out. We were working on some problems. One was pointed out by hawk. Everyone could see Author Only messages... Thanks Hawk.
Date: 10/19/1999 7:32:00 AM  From Authorid: 277    No problem, Admin. Hawk  
Date: 10/21/1999 12:49:00 PM  From Authorid: 697    I like the riddles!!!!
Date: 10/21/1999 1:28:00 PM  From Authorid: 155    yea exactly..a story..first of all..i think that this was all made up..it seems too surreal to be true and that's why i think it isn't true..it sounds so so bogus.
Date: 10/22/1999 1:54:00 AM  From Authorid: 1169    great story.....Z
Date: 10/25/1999 9:14:00 AM    Hey kids, it is fiction. Also, ADMIN.... I'm not the one writting some of these replies. Check your program out.Jedi
Date: 10/27/1999 7:02:00 PM  From Authorid: 1432    It was a really great story and had me hooked on it and I want to read the next part....but for some reason this story sounds kind of familiar..did this really happen to you Jedi? Just curious thats all..it just sounds a little familiar. Great story though!!...Banner  
Date: 10/28/1999 8:49:00 PM  From Authorid: 1270    hmmmmmmm......great story... please continue.
Date: 10/29/1999 8:40:00 PM    No, this didn't happen to me. If it sounds familiar, please let me know in what way? I'm making this crap up as I go along. That's why it's taking me forever to finish.- Jedi
Date: 11/1/1999 12:18:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 1574    Hey check out "something stinky is in my room - I need answers"-Jedi  
Date: 11/1/1999 6:14:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 1574    Stories can be as long as one would want them. Maybe you think my story is too long, that's cool. I don't expect evryone to have a long attention span. Not you anyway(1215)! Maybe your stories are short, that's cool too. People with a short attention span, can only read short stories. I don't care. That's my story. Like it or lump it! It's all up to you.-Jedi  
Date: 11/9/1999 5:50:00 PM    how stupid
Date: 11/9/1999 6:20:00 PM  From Authorid: 277    to 1270 first off all you have to do is ask one it doesn't matter which one what door would the other tell me to go out to get to the next level...Then you go out the opposite door..If you ask the liar of course he will lie. If you ask the honest man he will honestly tell you that the other one will lie about the door. So no matter what door they tell you to take, take the other door....NO RUNNING just open and walk to the next level.....HAWK  
Date: 11/9/1999 6:22:00 PM  From Authorid: 277    SORRY 1270 MEANT 1027  
Date: 11/26/1999 10:40:00 AM    Oh, Stephen King Master, please continue this horrow sci-fi story!! I am thristy for it...hehehe...
Date: 2/6/2000 5:23:00 AM  From Authorid: 3270    Wow! An excelent story! This and the part two are truely the best stories I've read on USM! On about the second paragraph It sucked me in, I couldn't put it down! I guess I underestimated how good the story was. It was grreat! Kind of like Frosted Flakes! lol. In the story the main charector was very smart, and wise. I loved it! -Pheonix  
Date: 2/6/2000 11:55:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 1574    Thanks pheonix..lol~Jedi  
Date: 2/14/2000 4:48:00 PM  From Authorid: 1444    I can't tell you how much you Amaze me Jedi!!! I am Speechless! You Rule!!! You're So GREAT!!! I love ALL your Stories!!!!! Is this overdoing it??? Probably... oh Well, YOU RULE!!!!!!!--- FIRE EYE  
Date: 2/19/2000 11:19:00 PM  From Authorid: 3124    realy good jedi  
Date: 3/11/2000 1:51:00 PM  From Authorid: 820    Oh my!! This was a Gurrrrate story!!! ~nicole~  
Date: 4/16/2000 3:53:00 PM    the story is great so far! I couldn't stop reading it!
Date: 9/10/2000 4:36:00 PM  From Authorid: 12823    WOW, this is one of the best fiction stories on this site. Love,  
Date: 9/10/2000 7:31:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 1574    This is my first story I ever posted here on this site.  
Date: 10/12/2000 2:06:00 PM  From Authorid: 17553    Amazing imagination
Date: 11/1/2000 1:48:00 PM  From Authorid: 17551    I just loved that story now going to read the second one . Babysis  
Date: 11/18/2000 7:34:00 PM  From Authorid: 7574    this is soooo good...I can't believe it:)  
Date: 11/23/2002 9:51:00 AM  From Authorid: 50556    Whoa..this is intense  

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